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Enough Room For Two
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-11-14
Alright, it said zero reviews when I hit the button so I´m hoping this will actually still be the frist one, once I´m done typing. Just to spite Crystal, of course.
First off, why wasn´t Sheena in this? Just kidding. I really appreciate this. :))) (Sheena, however, wishes she and Andy had kept their mouths shut about his... STRANGENESS (32).)
Second off (which, I know, you don´t say... but I do), "chillaxing"? PLONKILICOUS word! It goes into my DoJ dictionary. Along with "plonkilicious".
This is a perfect ending. There´s just not more that I can say. (But Crystal will, as I´m sure.) It´s just super the way it is. :) Also, you´re more than welcome for the "support". After all, we´re in DoJ, right? DoJhi5 followed by DoJ plonk drinking because Katy finished her story.
Now, fill us in on what´s going on in Not Looking-Land. :)Author's response
please explain the numbers. looks at you blankly
P.S Go read a review I left on that new story er, what's it called, Is this Fiction or something. I hope you like what I put there.
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(#) x-xJafax-x 2006-11-14
Wow... cnt believe its ended love the ending thou n carpal tunnel of love the song or is there a fic cled that meh im confused
enjoyed it oodles xxAuthor's response
I can't believe it ended either but who's to say their characters won't be used in future plots......I spent a lot of time building them up and writing, would be ashame to lose them completely......Enough Room For Two
(#) pixied_secrets 2006-11-14
so what, alex beat me. i'm at work, and i'm not even suppose to be searching FicWad, but i saw you updated and i couldn't stop myself.
first of all, this is the end? my sappy side wants to kidnap you and force you to make a sequel, because i'm sick and twisted like that. why did Sophie decide to give up Rory? and I would love to see an over-protective poppa Patrick with his baby girl. 'nuff said.
with that being said, the writer in me wants to give you a major DoJ high five and some plonk to wash it down with.
i'm going to use an itemized list now. brace yourself.
reasons why i loved this ending:
1.) humor in the form of referencing Sheena and Andy in their current, um, predicament. that's just good taste.
2.) rory is back! hells yea. the way he interacted with them as if he never left made me want to jump for joy (division, haha). oh, and the bitch fight between Shay and Sophie got me fired up. i love bitch fights.
3.) baby Aimee and the way she bring Patrick and Shay together, and turns Patrick into a sensitive poppa.
oh, and the numbers are only used when someone refers to me as strange (33). that's a fairly large number, being that this number game only began three days ago and started with 1.
gah, are you even reading this still? because at this point in the review i'm just talking out of my ass. do your part to save your sanity and stop reading this now. seriously.Author's response
I have three words to say to you, I know they may not mean much, but I'm finding it very hard to say so just bear with me.....OK here goes......
Division. of Joy
Thanks for the email too. When are you updating you sciver?? I'm waiting............still waiting........are YOU still reading THIS??? GO ALREADY!!
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(#) LOVELA 2006-11-14
This story completely ruled! And it had a happy ending. Sighs I do that a lot, if you hadn't noticed.
Your writing rules beyond any words that I have in my vocabulary, so rules will have to be the horrible word that I use to describe it. I hope you write more!!! YEA!
As the other girls say DOJHi5 or something like that. I'm not sure if I'm cool enough for this group :)Enough Room For Two
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-21
I hope this classifies as half decent ending, thank you so much to the reviewers, the people who took the time to read, take in and absorb this story. Thank you to those who didn't, because when you're bored enough one day and you read the 30 chapters, I know you'll feel stupid for not reading it sooner. Yeah... that's pretty much how I feel... big ol' stupid moi.
Anyway, I was reading your newest addition to the FOB fiction- the later story with the counselor- and I was all like 'there is a begining?' so I hunted this down... (Yes, hunted... the entire going to your profile page and scanning constitutes as such I believe). Anyway, this was beyond beautiful!!! And I'm actually really glad I read this all at once because if I had to wait between these chapters I would most likely be driven crazy. Anywho, this is going in my favs. I'm going to have to go back through and add points to all the chapters. ;) (I have a tendency to be stengy until Sunday around 10:00 and I just go through stories I like and throw them in its general direction.) Oh well... I'm rambling, sorry! You just need to know you are a brilliant writer and I kind-of sort-of love you!Author's response
Another FicWad Hussy in the bag.....Enough Room For Two
(#) halleluiakid 2007-03-20
aw dude!
that was just awesome..thank you so much for the entertainemnt.
great story.
o/ totally thumbs up.
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