- Hello, I think your chapter is cutoff.
Yeah - the book needs a better ending. I'm a H/Hr+ shipper. So the book was a little upsetting in the shipping end, but even aside from that, I think the worst part of the entire series has been the crapilogue. It's weirdly horrible in the way it left things.
I'm hoping your writing will make it a a good ending to tack on. :)
(#) red_jacobson 2007-08-19i agree with Jiltanith's comment about not making any future stories canon compliant; you have your own way of doing things; and it seems to hurt the story when you try to wrench it into compliance with canon.
glad to see you are still writing and looking forward to more of your stories.
- Harry seems a lot harder than in canon. Hermione is just as determined as always, and the ministry is still comprised of self-seeking fools. As Harry said in 'Like a song you can't unlearn' "Government is a necessary evil, but remember no matter how necessary, it is still evil."
Harry deals with the goblins in a very goblin manner (following their rules and customs, not those of the wizards). I think that will go a long way in healing the breach between the two peoples.
I second Jiltanith's plea. Harry and Barbi-Sue really don't go together, despite what JKR says.
I have placed this on my 'alerts list and hope to read more soon. Alorkin
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