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37 reviewsHarry escapes britain, and learns the truth about the weirdest heritage ever. He learns stuff and gets some girls, too. There will be a lot of NC-17 here, and not much quality. I write to amuse my...
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Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) jbstarnes1 2007-09-11
I don't usually go in for manipulated Harry or bonding-whatever, but this is actually well written enough that I want to see where it goes, especially after that summary. It's not easy to take really cliched, overdone material and make it interesting again but, so far, you have.Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) DavidMPotter 2007-10-04
I love this fic! I is original and hot.Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) Rocky235 2007-10-14
That was pretty well done and I certainly enjoyed it.Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) pfeil 2007-10-16
Yay, another Gabrielle story!
Jeconais's Hope got me hooked on her.Author's response
Me too. Unfortunately, I'm not even close to that good, and this is my first project. My Gabrielle will, once i get her going, be very different.
VanirHarry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-10-30
OK, I have to be a bit more critical than others. Your story is all over the place. There's not a real flow to it. It starts off with Hermione, Ginny and Luna. Enter Harry with Giant with blonde dreadlocks and mention of pictures of two other girls then to blown up number four, assuming that they are going back to school. Harry at Leaky Caldren and Gabrielle. There's no flow or time stamps or anything resembling a real story going on here. In reading the first chapter, I'm a little lost as to what is really going on. I'm lost on when things are happening. Is he reliving some things while getting ready to go back to school. It's somewhat set up to be a Harry/Harem pairing with a Manipulative!Dumbledore subplot. I don't really look towards spelling errors because we're human and that's what editors get paid for to proof read and fix. :) I'll read the next chapter and review.
Geovanni LucianoHarry Potter and the Midnight Sun.
(#) TheUnicorn 2008-01-11
Review of Chapter 1
Nice start, amazingly enough you managed to avoid all the usual "sudden realization" idiocies most independent!harry stories clog the start of the story, that's great. I'm glad you established the Gabrielle was 13, not 8 when Harry first saw her and if I'm guessing the direction your going you seem to have avoided the usual pitfalls with veela bonding nonsense. Good start, now I'll see if it lives up to expectations.
The UnicornAuthor's response
I hope it does.
Those sudden insights are sometimes necessary, but they are still annoying, especially when you have to use them. There are so many ways to go about a Bonding. Why use the same?
Thanks
Vanir
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