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Elementary Calculations
(#) Ishikawa 2008-06-02
That was the most brilliant conversation between first year H and old V ever written. I think the way he gets his "enemies" to find among themselves is simply brilliant, i wonder what the stuff will make of him, can't wait to see Minvera's reaction to Harry being there after all, i wonder if dumbles obliviated the knowledge of Harry's letter back.
Can't wait to read him taking care of Snape.Elementary Calculations
(#) red_jacobson 2008-06-02
Very interesting! I wonder if the two of them will be able to keep to the agreement for any length of time. Looking forward to more
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(#) loatroll 2008-06-02
Total Greatness!
By the way, When I started to read this chapter it was rated at 0 and I just finish and was just about to rate the story and BLAM already the story had "You cannot add more" grin
I like how he just doesn't care about the Wizarding world, and I agree wholeheartedly to that idea, he literally has no reason to stay there or anything to keep him there (except a meddling old fool).
Great stuff as always, and I'm really looking forward to reading more.Elementary Calculations
(#) torgrim 2008-06-02
Good chapter, personaly I liked you not including the Lily and Snape friendship, it never worked for me. At most I see Snape as a creepy stalker or hanger on - bit like a Slytherin version of Wormtail.
I look forward to seeing what happens with the teachers as well, seen things like this happen a number of times but so far I have realy enjoyed the way you have reworked these kinda ideas before.
Torg.Elementary Calculations
(#) DrT 2008-06-02
Interesting -- wonder if the little talk will make Voldie realize his errorsElementary Calculations
(#) swordchucks 2008-06-02
Really good chapter. I really like this story.
It'd be interesting seeing a series of debates between the two on the "proper" way to destroy and rebuild wizarding society.
Maybe Harry could create his own "wizarding world" with all of the muggleborn in it?Elementary Calculations
(#) jsdailey 2008-06-02
So Harry wants to dance on Dumbles' grave. heh.
Marvelous chapter, but I wonder since now that Harry knows of the prophecy... how soon will it be when he uses that knowledge against Dumbledore?Elementary Calculations
(#) Cateagle 2008-06-02
Oh, my, I wonder if Dumbles realizes just who and what he's brought together? You've got the shadow of a Dark Lord who wants power and you've forcibly brought in his supposed nemesis in such a way that the boy wants nothing to do with you and yours and now they're talking. ALbus, you've mucked this one up badly.
I did like the discussion 'tween Harry & Tom and I wonder if what Harry's said will give him pause to think?
On the downside, there were some typos, such as "wreak" instead of "wreck", that need fixing. It is, though, an excellent read.Elementary Calculations
(#) jabarber69 2008-06-02
Hey I can surely relate to Harry's opinion on the magical world. Hell anybody would be pissed if their entire life had been uprooted like his had by dumbydork! And as for his accord with voldie, I can see him doing that very easily. You dont bother me, then I want bother you, and you can have the magical world cause when my schooling is finished here at hogwarts I'm going back to the muggle world to live anyway.
P.S. I too have always figured that muggleborns would be long forgotten squib lines.
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