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Elementary Calculations
(#) anyegr 2008-06-02
I really like this story. Dumble-brains deserves whatever these two can come up with to hit him with.
I noticed that Voldemort mentioned Peter. The question is if Harry realizes that there is an innocent man in prison for Peter's crimes. In canon, no one told Harry about Sirius or Peter until after Sirius escaped.Elementary Calculations
(#) sizzlestar87 2008-06-02
Absolutely loved it! I hope you update soon!
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(#) Wonderbee31 2008-06-02
Really enjoyed this part a lot. Fun to see how things went with Harry and Tom there, and the two of them are acting much more like classic enemy and villain, with a bit of charm rather than the mad dog way that Tom came across in canon. Also fun to see how Harry is getting on with Padma and Su, and looking forward to the Hermione intro, as well as seeing what goes down with Snape, who is an idiot, and doesn't deserve half the love that people want to give him. He seems to be nothing more than a creepy stalker, who was "willing" to sacrifice the husband and child of the woman he "loved?" Yeah, great father material from the canon anyway.Author's response
Even before it became canon people would pair Lily with Snape and I just never saw the draw. Snape comes across very creepy in canon with the way he obssessed over Lily.Elementary Calculations
(#) biged78 2008-06-02
The more I read the more I like. Keep up the good work.Elementary Calculations
(#) Albeios 2008-06-02
Ah, Dumbledore's going to have one helluva headache once he finds this out. No doubt Voldemort is interested in having a protege...reminds me of one of Silverwolf's fics on harry being insane...Elementary Calculations
(#) Wolfric 2008-06-02
Great chapter. Your Harry is quite logical. If he makes some friends, he might be less content to see the wizzarding world burn. I am curious to see if Snape can be contained. Thanks for writing. W.Elementary Calculations
(#) slashslut 2008-06-02
that was an AWESOME chapter! i love how he is so aware of his environment and people's peronalities and plans his strategy accordingly. and his conversation with voldemort was . . . genius! i CANT wait to see how snape is dealt with evil smirk even though he's a death eater, he's an ass:) read ya later!Elementary Calculations
(#) thedon1023 2008-06-02
oh you definately made my day. Dumbles will rue the day he crossed Harry, Rue!!! now all Harry has to do for now is deal with Snape and then he can study and train his ass off while avoiding Dumbles, which im sure wont be to dificult for him to do. until next time
-The Don
Elementary Calculations
(#) SamStone 2008-06-02
nice liked the way that you didn't go with light = good. Nice to see the old man have issues in the future and the scenes with Snape and V were well done.
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