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• Awake in a Dream

  (#) Demenior 2006-10-23

  Oh, lordy, the emotion in this chapter! You've really brought it all together now Nuuoa! I was crying with everyone when they were together, though I wasn't as angry at Jay as Odie and Neil were. I was cheering on Jay when he went to battle Cronus ('If only she were here!')and comused with Theresa in that grey world between life and death, well, no life. You wrote it all so well, especially at the beginning when you were introducing us to this world.The sort of confusion you gave with different thoughts and how you explained that while she didn't have a memory, she liked the name 'Jayla' so we called her my that name until she remembered 'Theresa'. I like Jayes, I admit that made me giggle.
  
  And did I see some addition going on there? Yay for math! I'm eagerly looking forwards to an update, and if you get stuck just ask me or help- if you want some!
  
  ~Demenior

  Author's response

  Thanks so much for the possitive feedback Demenior. It is much appreciated. I'm glad you liked the description in it. I worked hard at the beginning. Jayla and Jayes (Or Theresa and Sailboats) were really hard for me to describe... so I'm glad you were confused/intrigued.
  
  And yes Herry can add! Go Herry! sniff I'm so proud. Honestly I got the idea from 'Noah'. Lol. The first inicial of Odie and Neil = O + N = No. Lol. And that would be much appriciated. Thanks Dem. ~Nuuoa Eclaire

• Awake in a Dream

  (#) iheartyou07 2006-10-23

  Wow. I am left speechless. That was just plain amazing. You really do have an amazing talent; you explained everything and it felt like we were there ourselves. I felt horrible for Jay when Odie and Neil were angry... but I loved your quote there about Archie's cooking..hehe. I feel bad for Theresa too... But, once again, please update soon!!

  Author's response

  Thakn you so much. You have been a constant support and I will so happy. YOu really don't know how much I thank you. And I fell bad for poor Jay too. Odie + Neil = bad. So proud of Herry. Thanks. And I will.

• Awake in a Dream

  (#) citrus-lime 2006-10-23

  YAY MORE MORE MORE! MUHAHAHAHAH!!!!

  Author's response

  Ok I'll do my best. I still have 5 chapters to write.

• Awake in a Dream

  (#) lovely_ 2006-10-23

  Oh my this was a good chapter!
  It's Still A/A right?
  It better be...
  haha this was really good update when you can!

  Author's response

  Thank you. And yes it is still A/A. I couldn't abandon them! Atlanta's just really iffed at poor Arch. She doesn't want to admit she love's him. I will.

• Awake in a Dream

  (#) story_master 2006-10-23

  Awsome chapter! I really love this story! You should seriously consider becoming an author! You'd be really good. I hope that Theresa is back. Did Jay use his wish to bring her back? Will she disappear after that battle. Oh so many questions. I guess I'll have to wait and find out. Awsome job:D Keep it up:D oh and please please update soon

  Author's response

  Thank you so much. You've been a great supporter. And tahnks soo much. And you'll have to wait and see... I like twists remember. (^-^) Listen to his wrods carefully. And I'll update as soon as possible.

• Awake in a Dream

  (#) Always_A_Legend 2006-10-23

  ooo! cronus had to slap himself! i'll help him! slap some more haha

  Author's response

  YAY! Let's all slap Cronus! slap

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